I'll offer feedback about how to improve and polish your query letter and the first ten pages of your manuscript. I'll make sure you are presenting a concise, well-constructed, error-free query letter. I'll offer suggestions about how to improve your pitch and the opening pages of your manuscript. Clean, well-presented work stands out from the crowd. $125

query letter and first ten pages: critique and edit

I'll read your complete manuscript, making comments throughout, using Microsoft Word track changes. I'll comment on inconsistencies, problems with continuity, believability issues and other developmental and structural suggestions that arise as I read. I'll provide a 1-2 page report highlighting the strengths and weaknesses of your book, including feedback on plot, pacing, structure, voice, style and character development. I'll let you know what I think works and what needs attention. I'll offer my opinion about the marketabiliy of your project. I'll include recommendations for editing. Up to 80,000 words: $700; 80,000 to 100,000 words: $750

manuscript evaluation and Reader report

I'll read through your entire manuscript, fine-tuning with a professional eye. I'll ensure that the syntax of your writing is smooth, that your writing is grammatically correct and free of spelling errors, and that your punctuation is correctly placed. I'll comment on inconsistencies, repetitive words and highlight other stylistic suggestions as they arise. I use track changes as I edit. Please note that this is a fine-tuning and final polish for manuscripts that are complete and have most likely gone through several drafts. This service is ideal for writers who are ready to query agents or are intending to self-publish and would like to present their best work. $.013 per word



I use PayPal. Credit cards and debit cards are also accepted through PayPal. I require a down payment of half the fee before I begin. Turnaround is three weeks.

Please do not query me or seek literary representation through this site. If you contact me for editorial services, you are choosing not to query me and I cannot represent your work. Queries received through this site will be deleted unread.