I'm Julie Dinneen, a literary agent at D4EO Literary Agency, with many years of editorial, publishing and writing experience. Before I became an agent, I worked as a freelance book editor, an academic editor and a professional writer.



Query Letter and first ten pages: critique and edit

I'll offer feedback about how to improve and polish your query letter and the first ten pages of your manuscript. I'll make sure you're presenting a concise, well-constructed, error-free query letter. I'll offer suggestions about how to improve your pitch and the opening pages of your manuscript. Clean, well-presented work stands out from the crowd.

Developmental edit

I'll read your manuscript, making comments throughout, using Microsoft Word track changes. I'll comment on inconsistencies, problems with continuity, believability issues and other developmental and structural suggestions that arise as I read. I'll provide a 1-2 page report highlighting the strengths and weaknesses of your book, including feedback on plot, pacing, structure, voice, style and character development. I'll let you know what I think works and what needs attention. I'll offer my opinion about the marketability of your project. I'll include recommendations for editing.


I'll read your manuscript, fine-tuning with a professional eye. I'll ensure that the syntax of your writing is smooth, that your writing is grammatically correct and free of spelling errors, and that your punctuation is correctly placed. I'll comment on inconsistencies, repetitive words and I'll highlight other stylistic suggestions as they arise. I use track changes as I edit. Please note that this is a fine-tuning for manuscripts that are complete and have most likely gone through several drafts. This service is ideal for writers who are ready to query agents or are intending to self-publish and would like to present their best work.

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Most of my time is dedicated to the work I do as a literary agent and the clients I represent. For this reason, I can only take on select editorial projects.

Please note: if you contact me for editorial work, you are choosing not to query me and I cannot represent your work.

To find out more about my editorial services, please email me at: